OPINION EDITORIAL PEER EDIT

I EDITED JACOB'S PAPER.

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
YES I FEEL THAT THE AUTHOR MADE A GREAT POINT OF VIEW AND IT CORRESPONDS THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE EDITORIAL.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
YES IT DOES I FEEL THAT IT'S GREAT

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
YES I FEEL THE PEICE ADRESSED SOME OF THE COUNTER ARGUMENTS EVEN THOUGH MORE WOULD BE GOOD TO HAVE.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
YES I DEFINETELY THINK IT WAS AN INTERESTING EDITORIAL

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?

YES THE PARAGRAPHS WERE ORGANIZED LOGICALLY THEY MADE SINCE.
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?

YES IT DID IT WAS A GOOD EDITORIAL OVER ALL.

I EDITED LUCAS GANSMOE'S PAPER

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
yes he did a great job stating his position
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
yes it does explain very good
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
yes the editorial addressed good counter arguments.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yes it was interesting
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
yes they were good in organization
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes each paragraph made since and gave me an idea of what it was trying to tell me.
7. Is the writing clear?

yes the writing was great.